Another illustration

I'm loving finding new illustration with different medias to try out, I find it so fun. Anyway while I was researching 'industrial fashion illustrations' I came across another illustration that caught my eye, this one used paint and pen but it was ripped up and stuck onto an image of a model, I wasn't sure if it would look right for my theme but there's no harm in trying is there? So that's what I did, I tried it out and here's how it went... Im thinking about involving another media (stitching, paint or more collage) into the illustration just so I can see how it would work and what the outcome would be like. But here's where I'm up to at the minute, oh and the original illustration is the bottom right hand corner